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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : you are as people told


كـــليوباترا
09-10-2008, 05:59 PM
you are as people told

when i held your hand
it was warm at before
but now you have no feeling
about me any more

all i wanted to do was
beeing with you
i wrote in my heart
i ll always love you

looking at your eyes
what i liked to do
my only promiss
never leaving you

people said you ll be changed
i never believed
i had the faith that
you d never leave

you went and left me
alone with my tears
you made me suffer
that no one can bears

now , you are here
infront of me
i m prisoner in your love
i m not free

what can i do ?
you are so cold
you are just like
which people told



- my handwriting -

best regards

Snake The Programmer
09-11-2008, 12:13 AM
Hm, its amazing how you could come up with such spectaculer words, your poems are brilliant, everytime i read those words i feel astonished by them
Nicely done
Best regards

بســــــــ بغداد ـمـــــة
09-11-2008, 01:54 AM
people said you ll be changed
i never believed
i had the faith that
you d never leave

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its a great handwriting
thanks for the nice poem

زهرة الالم
09-11-2008, 02:50 AM
it is amazing poem
written by you dear kileopatra
i like the soft words you deliver
thanx alot for such wonderful feeling
and handwriting
best wishes
regards
passion flower

رْيـتَاجّ
09-11-2008, 06:17 AM
Beautiful poem ..
Your distinctive taste


greetings

::45::

كـــليوباترا
09-11-2008, 04:26 PM
thank you alot you are so nice all of you
my best regards

رجل الظل الطويل
09-11-2008, 04:42 PM
ayooo ... wonderful kileopatra
keep it up
thanks

night912
09-13-2008, 08:00 PM
nice choice for good words
i enjoy reading such beatiful poems
i like it.... thanxxxxx alooooot
best wishes
night

.ROORA.
09-13-2008, 08:07 PM
this is very amazing
u r with no doubt can write
keep up the creativity
my regards
ROORA

ToKiO hOtEl
09-14-2008, 03:33 AM
It is so an amazing poem ..... thank you my angel ... ::51::

سمبل
09-14-2008, 04:58 AM
sooooooo cute
thanx